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Denver, Colorado. July 2nd, 2014.

Janice Barton knocked twice on the door to Dr. Wells's office before opening it and stepping inside, expression drawn. "Do you think you can see three more patients today?" she asked, without preamble.

"What?" Dr. Wells looked up from his paperwork, fingers clenching involuntarily on his pen. "I've already seen nine patients so far! I've barely finished filing the insurance information for Mrs. Bridge. How am I supposed to see three more before we close?"

"Because if you'll agree to see three more, I can probably convince the other nineteen to come back tomorrow," Janice replied. For the first time, Dr. Wells realized how harried his normally composed administrative assistant looked. Her nails were chipped. Somehow, that seemed like the biggest danger sign of all. A man-made virus was on the loose, Marburg Amberlee was doing...something...and Janice had allowed her manicure to fray.

"I'll see the three most in need of attention, and then I have to close for the night," he said, putting down his pen as he stood. "If I don't get some sleep, I won't be of any use to anyone."

"Thank you," said Janice, and withdrew.

She was gone by the time he emerged from his office, retreating to wherever it was she went when she was tired of dealing with the madhouse of the waiting room. On the days when it was a madhouse, anyway. This was definitely one of those days. The gathered patients set up a clamor as soon as he appeared, all of them waving for his attention, some of them even shouting. Dr. Wells stopped, looking at the crowd, and wondered if the other doctors involved in the Marburg Amberlee tests were having the same experience.

He was deeply afraid that they were.

The trouble wasn't the patients themselves; they looked as hale and healthy as ever, which explained how they were able to yell quite so loudly for his attention. Their cancers were gone, or under control, constantly besieged by their defensive Marburg Amberlee infections. It was the people they had brought to the office with them that presented the truly alarming problem. Husbands and wives, parents and children, they sat next to their previously ill relatives with glazed eyes, taking shallow, pained-sounding breaths. Some of them were bleeding from the nose or tear ducts—just a trickle, nothing life-threatening, but that little trickle was enough to terrify Dr. Wells, making his bowels feel loose and his stomach crawl.

They were manifesting the early signs of a Marburg Amberlee infection, during the brief phase where the body's immune system attempted to treat the helper virus as an invasion. That was the one stage of infection that could be truly harmful; when Marburg Amberlee was hit, it hit back, and it was more interested in defeating the opposition than it was in preserving the host. These people were infected, all of them.

And that simply wasn't possible. Marburg Amberlee wasn't transmittable through casual contact. Pointing almost at random, he said, "You, you, and you. I can see you before we close. Everyone else, I'm very sorry, but you're going to have to come back tomorrow."

Groans and shouts of protest spread through the room. "My baby's sick!" shouted one woman. A year before, she'd been dying of lung cancer. Now she was glaring at him like he was the devil incarnate. "What are you going to do about it?"

"I'm going to see you tomorrow," said Dr. Wells firmly, and waved for the chosen three to step through the door between the reception area and the examination rooms. He retreated with relief, the feeling of dread growing stronger.

He honestly had no idea what he was going to do.

***

Rumors of an outbreak of hemorrhagic fever in and around the Colorado Cancer Research Center have, as yet, been unsubstantiated. The head doctor, Daniel Wells, is unavailable for comment at this time.

When will you Rise?

Date: 2011-05-12 01:51 am (UTC)
beccastareyes: Image of Sam from LotR. Text: loyal (Default)
From: [personal profile] beccastareyes
Oh, shit.

Date: 2011-05-12 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silvertwi.livejournal.com
My reaction too.


I must say, Seanan, these vignettes are making me more and more excited for Deadline. May explain why I re-read Feed over the weekend, as well.

*is planning to buy two copies plus a new copy of Feed when Deadline comes out*

Date: 2011-05-12 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wendyzski.livejournal.com
I've been waiting on a re-read until a friend gets out of the hospital on Saturday morning (if her chemo goes well). Because if I am in mid-read and walk in there I'm going to freak out.

Date: 2011-05-12 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seanan-mcguire.livejournal.com
...I so understand.

Date: 2011-05-12 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inkgrrl.livejournal.com
Yes. This.

Date: 2011-05-12 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alicetheowl.livejournal.com
Did you name the doctor after another writer?

Date: 2011-05-12 03:45 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-05-12 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solcita.livejournal.com
This story grows more terrifying with each pre-history snippet. Good work!

Date: 2011-05-12 02:39 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thornsilver
*sqeek!*

Date: 2011-05-12 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paradisacorbasi.livejournal.com
The tension level climbs with every little vignette.

And yes, the "normal is hell and gone because the assistan's manicure is chipped" is a powerful image.


Thank you.

Date: 2011-05-12 06:32 am (UTC)
laurenthemself: Rainbow rose with words 'love as thou wilt' below in white lettering (BSC: Claudia OMG!)
From: [personal profile] laurenthemself
Agreed, it's the little things like that that make you go 'wow, this is so real'.

Date: 2011-05-12 06:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com
"Marburg Amberlee wasn't transmittable through casual contact."

Hmm. Since it obviously is transmitted, there must be a mistake in that assumption. And it hasn't even met the Kellis virus (which seems similarly jealous of other infections) once installed in the host) yet. Oh my...

Date: 2011-05-12 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dornbeast.livejournal.com
If I understand what's happening correctly, when Kellis interacts with Marburg Amberlee, instead of destroying it, Kellis absorbs aspects of Marburg Amberlee, creating Kellis-Amberlee. Kellis-Amberlee is transmittable through casual contact, as well as having other interesting effects.

Date: 2011-05-12 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com
Yes, sort of a "this town ain't big enough for the two of us!" resulting in a merger.

But my reference to casual contact was about Marburg Amberlee before the two meet, that since there are a lot of cases of infection the virus is obviously being transmitted, therefore the assumption (by the doctor) that it was being transmitted by casual contact was incorrect. Of course, for married partners the contact may have been far from 'casual', and between them and their children things like kissing may have passed it on (as it can for HSV1 when a parent with a "cold sore" kisses a child), but unless the place is a hotbed of orgies how did it get to so many families? Perhaps it's more easily transmitted than he thinks...

Date: 2011-05-17 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sfogarty.livejournal.com
Why do you think it hasn't met Kellis yet? There's been time..

Date: 2011-05-12 08:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amanda-nye.livejournal.com
ooooh... we get to see a glimpse of the beginning... when they started realizing things went wrong. likey!

Date: 2011-05-12 09:57 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] madfilkentist
Apropos of ... something:

Bedbugs with 'superbug' germ found (Boston.com)

Date: 2011-05-12 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orlacarey.livejournal.com
Yay for being caught up! Yikes on the first hints of doom. Question - are we going to see pre-rising George and Shawn?

Date: 2011-05-12 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seanan-mcguire.livejournal.com
...they haven't even been born yet.

Date: 2011-05-12 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orlacarey.livejournal.com
Ahhh...for some reason I thought they were old enough to be small children before the rising. Something about the line about them not coming with original birth certificates meaning they were orphanned in the initial wave. Is what I get for assuming...

BTW you said something about having to post some stories late due to your next convention - meant to tell you that there is a way to have things post at a pre-determined time. I don't know how to do it but I've seen Jim Hines make reference to doing it. Not sure the idea is worth researching but thought I'd mention it.

Date: 2011-05-12 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inkgrrl.livejournal.com
On a completely different note, your doll fetish is triggering my latent sewing gene... back in the Dark Ages I learned how to sew by making fancy Barbie doll outfits. I may have to use my googlefu to uncover pattern sizing basics for some of the more interesting dolls out there and get to creating fripperies.

Date: 2011-05-12 06:22 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-05-12 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hasufin.livejournal.com
It occurs to me that, in a way, the combination of Alpha-RC007 and Marburg-Amberlee was a stroke of incredible luck.

Marburg-Amberlee, while being Ebola, is a blunted Ebola which in general doesn't kill. If Alpha-RC007 had instead fused with a more lethal strain of filovirus, or possibly something equally lethal like rabies, things would be so much worse.

Of course, who is to say that hasn't happened at all? Would we know?

Date: 2011-05-12 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] themysteriousg.livejournal.com
They've all been good but this one flat out gave me goosebumps. My skin is still crawling.

thanks;)

Date: 2011-05-12 09:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] silveraspen
These are amazing. Largely because of these I am now reading Feed for the first time and am almost to the end, and cannot wait for the next one.

Date: 2011-05-12 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yellowblackhaze.livejournal.com
The feeling of impending doom you build in these is just great. It's like watching the start of a disaster movie.

Date: 2011-06-17 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedorkygirl.livejournal.com
Oh my gosh..."My baby's sick!"

What a terrible situation.

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